WALK ALONE

 

We walk alone,

Year after year.

Troubles weigh us down,

No end in sight.

Our loads become heavy,

Our bodies weary.

Frowns on our faces,

Eyes to the sky above,

We ask for salvation.

No answer for our ears.

Hope lingers in our souls,

A hope for better days.

If not in this lifetime,

then maybe in the next.

5 thoughts on “WALK ALONE

  1. mihrank May 6, 2017 / 4:46 am

    the sound of the water, makes this blog a musical echo..

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    • Susanne Leist May 6, 2017 / 9:22 pm

      I need you for the sound effects. You have soulful music.

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      • mihrank May 7, 2017 / 12:16 am

        wow – anytime, the best writer ever:)

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      • Susanne Leist May 7, 2017 / 12:24 am

        Thanks!!! I’m blushing. I wish I can receive praise like that about my book. With poetry, you can reveal your feelings easier. Now, flowery words and thoughts are frowned upon on books. Everything is about action. Maybe I’ll stick with poetry and hone it into a craft.

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      • mihrank May 7, 2017 / 12:24 am

        keep up with your magic golden ink…

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