TAKE ME DOWN TO THE BASEMENT

Darkness, my old friend

TAKE ME DOWN TO THE BASEMENT

Please take me down the basement stairs,
Where I could face my deep, dark fears.
I heard there were traps and sharp saws,
Where animals have lost their paws.
A head might be rolling by,
Could those be two rolling eyes?
I’m too afraid and want to leave
This awful place of make believe.

THE DEAD GAME

Kindle

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Nook

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4 thoughts on “TAKE ME DOWN TO THE BASEMENT

  1. Maria F. June 12, 2015 / 4:58 pm

    Very good and I like its brevity and to-the-point style

    Like

  2. Susanne Leist June 12, 2015 / 5:15 pm

    Thank you. I’m trying to write more to the point, without using extraneous words. I even edited my book to remove excess adverbs and descriptions. These are my practice sessions.

    Like

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